Appendix Translation Techniques of Cinderella’s Step Sisters’s Utterances in Cinderella Movie No 1
Utterances Source Language She’s skinny as a broomstick!
Translation Target Language
Dia sekurus tongkat sapu! Dan rambutnya bagai
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And that stringy hair!
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You’re very nice.
Kau baik sekali.
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You have such pretty hair.
Rambutmu bagus.
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You should have it styled.
Kau harus menatanya.
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What did she say?
Dia bilang apa?
She wants to show us
Dia mau perlihatkan
around her farmhouse.
rumah pertaniannya.
She’s proud of it, I think.
Dia membanggakannya.
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Do they keep animals inside? What does Mummy
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mean? What’s so charming about it?
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serabut!
Ada hewan di dalam? Apa maksud Ibu? Apanya yang menarik?
She’s lying. That’s just
Dia berbohong. Itu hanya
good manners.
sopan santun.
How long has your family
Sudah berapa lama
lived here?
keluargamu di sini?
And in all that time, they
Selama ini mereka tak
never thought to
terpikir untuk
decorate?
mendekorasi?
Remember the lace! I
Ingat rendanya! Aku harus
simply must have it!
memilikinya!
And my parasol!
Dan payung kecilku!
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For my complexion!
Untuk melindungi corakku!
That means skin, if you
Artinya kulit, jika kau tak
don’t know!
tahu!
There isn’t room for me
Tak cukup ruang untukku
and all of your clothes!
dan semua pakaianmu!
Well, then make yourself smaller!
Buat punyamu lebih kecil!
Or better yet, disappear
Atau lebih bagus lagi,
entirely!
semuanya lenyap!
You’d like that, wouldn’t you?
Itu maumu, ya?
Sometimes I could scratch Kadang aku ingin your eyes out!
mencabut matamu!
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Simpleton.
Dasar gila.
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That is the last straw.
Cukup sudah.
Our little sister, up there,
Adik kita di atas
talking to the woodworm.
mengobrol dengan rayap.
We have a halfwit for a
Kita punya saudari yang
sister.
bodoh.
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I’ve got two.
Aku punya dua.
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I heard that.
Aku dengar itu.
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Who is she talking to?
Dia bicara kepada siapa?
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She’s mad
Dia gila.
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But what about my lace?
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Bagaimana dengan rendaku?
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My parasol?
Payungku?
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It’s ash from the fireplace. Itu abu dari tungku api.
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You’ll get cinders in our
Nanti ada arang di teh
tea.
kami.
I’ve got a new name for
Aku punya nama baru
her! Cinderwench.
untuk dia! Gadis arang.
I couldn’t bear to look so
Aku tak tahan terlihat
dirty.
kotor.
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Dirty ella!
Ella kotor.
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Cinder-ella!
Ella arang!
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That’s what we’ll call you.
Itu panggilan untukmu.
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I shall trick him into loving me. See if I don’t! This is the most hugest news!
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Akan kurayu dia untuk mencintaiku. Lihat saja
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nanti! Ini berita terbesar!
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I, a princess?
Aku, seorang putri?
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Or rather, I..
Atau tepatnya, aku...
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a princess?
Seorang putri?
Mummy, she believes the
Ibu, dia kira gaun satunya
other dress is for her.
lagi untuk dia.
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Poor, slow, little Cinder.
Cinder kecil yang bodoh.
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How embarrassing.
Memalukan sekali.
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She’s doesn’t know what
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Dia tak tahu artinya.
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Tell me what she said,
Tadi dia bilang apa,
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Drisella.
Drisella?
that means.
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I speak French, not Italian!
Aku bisa bahasa Prancis, bukan Italia!
You want me to be your
Kau ingin aku menjadi
queen?
ratumu?
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Who? Me?
Siapa? Aku?
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Tighter!
Lebih ketat!
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That’s it!
Bagus!
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A vision, sister.
Kau cantik.
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Likewise.
Kau juga.
We must compete for the
Kita harus bersaing untuk
prince’s hand.
menikahi pangeran.
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But let it not mean we 58
harbor dark thoughts against each other.
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Tapi jangan sampai kita saling membenci.
Of course not, dear sister.
Tentu tidak.
I wouldn’t dream of
Aku takkan meracunimu
poisoning you before we
sebelum pergi ke pesta
leave for the ball.
dansa.
Oh, nor I of pushing you
Aku juga takkan
for a moving carriage on
mendorongmu ke kereta
the way there.
kuda di perjalanan.
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Or I of dashing your brains Atau mendorongmu di 62 63 64
out on the palace steps as
anak tangga istana saat
we arrive.
kita tiba.
We are sisters after all.
Kita bersaudari.
And blood is so much
Darah lebih kental dari
thicker than water.
air.
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We shall let the prince
Biar pangeran yang
decide.
memutuskan.
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What he’s like?
Seperti apakah rupanya?
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He’s rich beyond reason.
Dia kaya raya.
Certainly not. It might
Tentu tidak. Itu bisa
change my mind.
mengubah pikiranku.
I bet you have never ever
Kau pasti belum pernah
spoken to a man.
bicara dengan lelaki.
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Sudah pernah, muka
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Have you, moon-face?
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Some menial, no doubt.
Pasti orang biasa.
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Some ‘prentice.
Hanya murid.
All men are fools, that’s
Semua lelaki bodoh, itu
what Mama says.
kata Ibu.
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bulan?
The sooner you learn that, Semakin cepat kau tau
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the better.
itu, semakin baik.
The first dance, milady?
Dansa pertama, Nona?
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Prince Charming, you’re
Pangeran Tampan, kau
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so naughty!
nakal sekali!
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I want to try.
Aku ingin coba.
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No, I’m wearing it.
Tidak, aku sedang pakai.
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No!
Tidak!
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My Prince!
Pangeranku!
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He will love me!
Dia akan mencintaiku!
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But I will be his queen!
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Tapi aku akan menjadi ratunya!
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Cinderella at the ball!
Cinderella di pesta dansa!
No wants a servant for a
Tak ada yang mau
bride.
menikahi pembantu.
And this!
Dan ini!
It’s a ridiculous, old-
Ini gaun kuno yang
fashioned joke!
menggelikan!
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I’m Drisella.
Aku Drisella.
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And I’m Anastasia.
Aku Anastasia.
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People will want to know.
Orang-orang pasti ingin
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I’m the clever one.
Aku yang cerdas.
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I’m very beautiful.
Aku sangat cantik.
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Who’s that, Mama?
Siapa itu, Ibu?
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That’s lovely dress she’s
tahu.
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Gaunnya indah.
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And how pretty she is.
Dia cantik sekali.
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But no one’s asked us to
Tak ada yang mengajak
dance.
kami berdansa.
Cinderella! We’ll have to
Cinderella! Kita harus
wake her up.
bangunkan dia.
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Wake up, lazy bones!
Bangun, pemalas!
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Tea and a plate of biscuits. Teh dan sepiring biskuit.
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You look cheerful!
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got on.
Kau riang sekali!
100 And wet!
Dan basah!
101 Typical.
Sudah biasa.
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We did not communicate 102 through more words. Our
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dengan kata-kata. Jiwa
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souls met.
kami bertemu.
Precisely. My soul and the
Tepat. Jiwaku dan jiwa
prince’s soul.
pangeran.
Your soul was over by the
Jiwamu ada di meja
banquet tables.
makan.
You didn’t see him dance
Kau tak melihatnya
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with me.
berdansa denganku.
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It was not our fault,
Itu bukan salah kami, Ibu.
Mother. It was that girl.
Karena gadis itu.
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Kami tidak berkomunikasi
Putri misterius itu.
And he actually danced
Dan pangeran berdansa
with the ugly thing.
dengan gadis jelek itu.
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Ya.
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Pangeran terlalu sopan untuk mengusirnya di
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depan semua orang.
But not wanting to expose Karena tak ingin kami 111
us to the presumptuous
melihat gadis liar itu lebih
wench any further, he
lama lagi, ia
took her apart.
membawanya pergi.
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and the palace guards chased her from the party!
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Dan mengusirnya.
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Tapi gadis itu menolak pergi dan penjaga istana
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mengusirnya!
I pity the prince. Such bad
Kasihan pangeran.
taste.
Seleranya buruk.
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Mereka cocok bersama.
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other. 116 It’s so very unfair.
Itu tidak adil.
117 Horses!
Kuda!
118 Mother, it’s our chance!
Ibu, ini kesempatan kita!
119 Let them in!
Biarkan mereka masuk!
120 It shrunk.
Sepatunya menyusut.
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121 Oh enough!
Cukup!
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122 It fits me!
Sepatunya muat!
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Ella! My dear sister! I’m
Ella! Saudariku tercinta!
sorry.
Aku menyesal.
124 So verry sorry.
Aku sangat menyesal.
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